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Hey, y’all. I know it’s been a while since I posted a significant journal entry, so I figured I’d start things off with another concept I’m currently working on, this time for a fantasy story (working title Psalm of Pendansia). While I have a very strong idea on where I want to take the narrative, lately I have been questioning the era in which I want to set the story. Currently, I’m tied between two options, and I’d really appreciate any input you guys have to give me.
Here’s a few facts on the story to help with my decision:
This is a story that’s going to heavily involve humans being rallied into seeing elvenkind as a blight upon the world, as well as many other races in the world. They are organized into demolishing the great elven kingdoms and all other races are free to either join them or be taken down with the elves.
The major powers within this fantasy story are the humans and the elves, with dwarves playing the part of a more subservient race after nearly being wiped out in the Great Inner War that brought centuries of peace between the races. Orcs are a very simple-living, burly race but not evil in the least for this story, while goblins are a more crafty race who work primarily in harnessing mana as a renewable energy source or being commissioned for designing mechanics for the kingdoms.
With a these themes in mind, I’m left to question exactly how I want to set the story:
1. Either have it set during the common trope of the Middle ages, with each of the major races of the world having a vast series of kingdoms, while other races are pretty much subgroups living in the outskirts in subservience or in independent territories. Obviously, themes such as hierarchy and honor will be prevalent, but there’s no prophecy or destiny for any of these characters, just a means of survival.
Or
2. Have it set during the early 20th century, with a hint of fascism on the part of the humans of the story. It’d be way too blunt if I made it shaped like Nazi Germany, so I was almost thinking of something more in the shape of America in the early 1900’s (maybe even the 20’s), when the nation was beginning to become a world power but intolerance was still heavily prevalent within and outside of society.
If you guys do have input on this, I’d greatly appreciate it. Thanks again
Here’s a few facts on the story to help with my decision:
This is a story that’s going to heavily involve humans being rallied into seeing elvenkind as a blight upon the world, as well as many other races in the world. They are organized into demolishing the great elven kingdoms and all other races are free to either join them or be taken down with the elves.
The major powers within this fantasy story are the humans and the elves, with dwarves playing the part of a more subservient race after nearly being wiped out in the Great Inner War that brought centuries of peace between the races. Orcs are a very simple-living, burly race but not evil in the least for this story, while goblins are a more crafty race who work primarily in harnessing mana as a renewable energy source or being commissioned for designing mechanics for the kingdoms.
With a these themes in mind, I’m left to question exactly how I want to set the story:
1. Either have it set during the common trope of the Middle ages, with each of the major races of the world having a vast series of kingdoms, while other races are pretty much subgroups living in the outskirts in subservience or in independent territories. Obviously, themes such as hierarchy and honor will be prevalent, but there’s no prophecy or destiny for any of these characters, just a means of survival.
Or
2. Have it set during the early 20th century, with a hint of fascism on the part of the humans of the story. It’d be way too blunt if I made it shaped like Nazi Germany, so I was almost thinking of something more in the shape of America in the early 1900’s (maybe even the 20’s), when the nation was beginning to become a world power but intolerance was still heavily prevalent within and outside of society.
If you guys do have input on this, I’d greatly appreciate it. Thanks again
Weening off Tumblr, Here's some of my Other Sites
Hey All. I'm very happy that people are starting to appreciate my work on this platform again, and I was thinking that I'd love to see you guys on some other sites as well. With a lot of skepticism over Tumblr as of late, I thought it'd be worthwhile to list a few of my other sites where you guys could find me. Not that I'm getting rid of my tumblr just yet (http://alexneish.tumblr.com) but I'll be likely to post more of my concept work over on these other sites, while I'll have more of my finished works posted here.
Anyway, here's the links to my other sites:
Portfolio: https://www.mvrcreations.com
Twitter: https://twitter.com/MVR_the_Cre
Input on Party System for A Game Concept
Hey, All. So as a creative project I’m working on a rough game concept with mechanics similar to Paper Mario and Child of Light, but with a narrative heavily inspired by Nier and Drakengard (...and Demon’s Souls ...)
Ideally I’d be going for a open world 2D side scroller (or top down) with a mixture of RTS and TBS elements in combat. But what I’m thinking about is How I want the payer to explore the world: either alone or with companions. So here’s some of the systems that I’m thinking of:
-Single player with no companions, exploring the vast and crushing world with only a few friendly faces along the way,
Which Fantasy Race Would You Date?
Hey, Guys. For a study, I’m curious as to what type of fantasy race the general public would go for if they had the option to do so in a fantasy setting (for a potential game). The races, and brief character traits, that I have in mind are as follows:
Human: generous and righteous, but can be opinionated and ignorant of others at times
Elf: compassionate and loyal, but can be slightly conservative and self-involved
Orc: free-spirited and very protective, but can be assertive and easy to insult, even by mistake
Dwarf: high-spirited and committed, but can be reserved and unwilling to talk about themselves
Mer-person: exotic and trust
The Rest of the Week
Hey, y'all. Just a quick head's up for those of you who would keep tabs on this kind of stuff. This week's looking pretty heavy for me schoolwise, and I'm gonna be on vacation for the next couple of days starting this Saturday. So if you don't see any new deviations from me for a while, that'll likely be why. If I do end up posting anything, it'll probably just be because I had a little time to spare. Just please don't be too surprised if you see a lack of activity on my end for now.
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I would roll with the second option because its the road less traveled.
How will you handle magic in the 1900s?
There is an old pc rpg called Arcanum that is set in a world in the beginning of the Industrial Revolution.
This might help give you some ideas.
The way they handled magic was that it was supernatural, not part of nature.
Mages had to sit in the back of trains because their aura affected the train's workings.
Races had a tech/magic bias.
Elves were on the magic side while dwarves and humans were on the side of tech.
Bioshock infinite would provide some useful ideas too.
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You could also set your story in the future.
Not too many folks do that.
Check out the Shadowrun series for ideas.
How will you handle magic in the 1900s?
There is an old pc rpg called Arcanum that is set in a world in the beginning of the Industrial Revolution.
This might help give you some ideas.
The way they handled magic was that it was supernatural, not part of nature.
Mages had to sit in the back of trains because their aura affected the train's workings.
Races had a tech/magic bias.
Elves were on the magic side while dwarves and humans were on the side of tech.
Bioshock infinite would provide some useful ideas too.
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You could also set your story in the future.
Not too many folks do that.
Check out the Shadowrun series for ideas.